Looks cool to me.
You are a scary man.
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| Author: | kissrules73 [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 12:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Looking for some feedback |
Did my first group video project at Illinois Center for Broadcasting. We learned how to do different shots and we had to have people come from one room to another. We decided to a horror movie type thing. I'm the "killer" I uploaded the video to Youtube and I was looking for some feedback on how it looks. https://youtu.be/EWh4g8J1o5A |
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| Author: | billypootons [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 12:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
i dont really know how to critque this. it was interesting though |
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| Author: | Dr. Kenneth Noisewater [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 7:58 am ] |
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If anything, IVCC can use it to promote their Serial Murder program. |
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| Author: | bigfan [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:04 am ] |
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kissrules73 wrote: Did my first group video project at Illinois Center for Broadcasting. We learned how to do different shots and we had to have people come from one room to another. We decided to a horror movie type thing. I'm the "killer" I uploaded the video to Youtube and I was looking for some feedback on how it looks. https://youtu.be/EWh4g8J1o5A Needed you for the McNugget Competition????? |
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| Author: | Hawg Ass [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
bigfan wrote: kissrules73 wrote: Did my first group video project at Illinois Center for Broadcasting. We learned how to do different shots and we had to have people come from one room to another. We decided to a horror movie type thing. I'm the "killer" I uploaded the video to Youtube and I was looking for some feedback on how it looks. https://youtu.be/EWh4g8J1o5A Needed you for the McNugget Competition????? There's still Spanky's Bic Mac competition. |
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| Author: | bigfan [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
Hawg Ass wrote: bigfan wrote: kissrules73 wrote: Did my first group video project at Illinois Center for Broadcasting. We learned how to do different shots and we had to have people come from one room to another. We decided to a horror movie type thing. I'm the "killer" I uploaded the video to Youtube and I was looking for some feedback on how it looks. https://youtu.be/EWh4g8J1o5A Needed you for the McNugget Competition????? There's still Spanky's Bic Mac competition. Still needs to be worked out...Big Mac's v QP's? Might be tough to judge as who is to say 3.5 or 3.25 Big MAc's? McNuggets...no doubts.... |
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| Author: | Hawg Ass [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
bigfan wrote: Hawg Ass wrote: bigfan wrote: kissrules73 wrote: Did my first group video project at Illinois Center for Broadcasting. We learned how to do different shots and we had to have people come from one room to another. We decided to a horror movie type thing. I'm the "killer" I uploaded the video to Youtube and I was looking for some feedback on how it looks. https://youtu.be/EWh4g8J1o5A Needed you for the McNugget Competition????? There's still Spanky's Bic Mac competition. Still needs to be worked out...Big Mac's v QP's? Might be tough to judge as who is to say 3.5 or 3.25 Big MAc's? McNuggets...no doubts.... May have to go to the Official Rule Book on that one Biggie. |
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| Author: | bigfan [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
Spanky could be one of the "dunkers", when he takes the burger from the bun, dunks the bun in water and compresses it. |
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| Author: | pittmike [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:24 am ] |
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Looks cool to me. You are a scary man.
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| Author: | Hawg Ass [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:27 am ] |
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bigfan wrote: Spanky could be one of the "dunkers", when he takes the burger from the bun, dunks the bun in water and compresses it. That just seems so disgusting to me, I know I would vomit if I tried that. Hell I want to vomit just watching people do it. |
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| Author: | bigfan [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
pittmike wrote: Looks cool to me. You are a scary man. Almost more interesting than Game of Thrones |
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| Author: | W_Z [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 10:07 am ] |
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i want to say the slow running vs. cane was on purpose. at least, i thought it was amusing. the music was a nice touch. one thing that can always emphasize suspense in a film is close ups and cuts. not too many cuts, but enough to keep you guessing on where the next shot will be, and who will be in it. the climax in rob zombie's "halloween" is a great example of this. too many long shots will kill suspense because you're seeing too much. key to horror is what you don't see, and the anticipation of what you will. |
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| Author: | good dolphin [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 10:19 am ] |
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the technical aspects seemed fine for a first try The key to horror is psychology. Find what universally makes people uncomfortable and somehow set your victim in those situations. In scenes where a potential victim is moving, I have always found that the best way to heighten horror is to move from the open space to progressively smaller spaces until the victim is finally stuck in a closeted type space. The clausterphobia subconsciously upsets the audience. In that scene, pan the entire classroom, make it look huge. The hallway shot is fine but you showed too much hallway. It didn't shrink the space. The next hallway was shorter and cluttered which is good, however, she still had the ability to escape. Maximize the thrill with a dead end or closet. |
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| Author: | Don Tiny [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 10:27 am ] |
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kissrules73 wrote: we had to have people come from one room to another Gross, but impressive. |
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| Author: | spmack [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 10:32 am ] |
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I want to see some more of this chick. |
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| Author: | good dolphin [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 10:44 am ] |
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also, why no brothers in the film? Too many clothes on the woman...not enough on you |
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| Author: | Godfella [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 4:48 pm ] |
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I love the old school IVCC Apaches jacket, kiss. Cool video. Is that the new Miller Media Facility? Apaches was the mascot before the PC Police started hounding schools with Native-American characters/mascots to change. Now we are the Illinois Valley Community College Eagles. Never gonna get any flak over that mascot for sure! Bonus question for my fellow Illinois Valley brothers... You guys remember when IVCC had an all out kick-ass football program? What year was the final snap before it got sacked from the curriculum? |
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| Author: | bigfan [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 4:52 pm ] |
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Sith Lord feel...needed some lights dimmed. |
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| Author: | Chus [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:02 pm ] |
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good dolphin wrote: also, why no brothers in the film? Elmhurst Steve is an investor. |
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| Author: | IMU [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
spmack wrote: I want to see some more of this chick. I feel if you somehow worked being unable to see her face into the short, it would definitely add to the suspense. |
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| Author: | IkeSouth [ Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Looking for some feedback |
kissrules73 wrote: Did my first group video project at Illinois Center for Broadcasting. We learned how to do different shots and we had to have people come from one room to another. We decided to a horror movie type thing. I'm the "killer" I uploaded the video to Youtube and I was looking for some feedback on how it looks. https://youtu.be/EWh4g8J1o5A your walk is whats wrong. everything else is good. walk slower. and dont change pace. she will gain distance from you, but every cut youre suddenly right behind her. thats how they do it in all the movies anyway. but the key is to not change pace. the calmer the killer is, the more suspenseful the scene. |
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