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Author:  Darkside [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 2:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Chicago Tribune

Quote:
12:25 p.m. CDT, July 31, 2013



ABCNews.com reports: Hall of Famer and former Bears running back George McAfee died in an Atlanta assisted-living facility in 2009 when, after having developed dementia, he wandered unsupervised into a cleaning room and drank from a bottle of industrial-strength detergent.

The caustic chemical burned McAfee's lips, esophagus and lungs and he died a short time later in a hospital, according to his family, which settled with the company that ran the facility


Really? This is 2013. Why the hell would this be in the paper now?

Author:  Drop In [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

Darkside wrote:
Quote:
12:25 p.m. CDT, July 31, 2013



ABCNews.com reports: Hall of Famer and former Bears running back George McAfee died in an Atlanta assisted-living facility in 2009 when, after having developed dementia, he wandered unsupervised into a cleaning room and drank from a bottle of industrial-strength detergent.

The caustic chemical burned McAfee's lips, esophagus and lungs and he died a short time later in a hospital, according to his family, which settled with the company that ran the facility


Really? This is 2013. Why the hell would this be in the paper now?


This just happened.

Author:  Darkside [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

Drop In wrote:
Darkside wrote:
Quote:
12:25 p.m. CDT, July 31, 2013



ABCNews.com reports: Hall of Famer and former Bears running back George McAfee died in an Atlanta assisted-living facility in 2009 when, after having developed dementia, he wandered unsupervised into a cleaning room and drank from a bottle of industrial-strength detergent.

The caustic chemical burned McAfee's lips, esophagus and lungs and he died a short time later in a hospital, according to his family, which settled with the company that ran the facility


Really? This is 2013. Why the hell would this be in the paper now?


This just happened.

His death in 2009 just happened?

Author:  Drop In [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

The part in bold. They just settled with the company from the 2009 death.

Author:  Darkside [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

Keeping Score wrote:
No dummy, the settlement with the assisted living company just happened, as well as the PBS documentary.

Well the settlement nor the documentary were the subject of the headline nor the first paragraph of the story, his death was. The settlement was basically the last thing they mentioned and I don't think the trib article mentioned the documentary at all.
So instead of douching them for a 4 year old story how about for terrible writing and editing?

Author:  Drop In [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

Keeping Score wrote:
Am I here?


Hi. I have to go now. No, seriously.

Author:  Don Tiny [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

Shit reporting is shit reporting. Apparently creating a readable story isn't party of "journalism" - such as it is - anymore.

Seconded.

(would've been much more entertaining if McAfee had died from some unknown virus .... just sayin')

Author:  MxdCookie [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

Darkside wrote:
Keeping Score wrote:
No dummy, the settlement with the assisted living company just happened, as well as the PBS documentary.

Well the settlement nor the documentary were the subject of the headline nor the first paragraph of the story, his death was. The settlement was basically the last thing they mentioned and I don't think the trib article mentioned the documentary at all.
So instead of douching them for a 4 year old story how about for terrible writing and editing?


Did anyone search to see if they mentioned the death back in 2009 when it actually happened? Or is this the first they're reporting on it?
And yes, it is bad writing and editing, regardless.

Author:  Peoria Matt [ Sat Aug 17, 2013 3:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

There goes my "industrial-strength detergent recommendations" thread.

Author:  good dolphin [ Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

The company tried to scrub their record clean of this story.

Even after all these years it still chokes me up.

Author:  rogers park bryan [ Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:16 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Chicago Tribune

good dolphin wrote:
The company tried to scrub their record clean of this story.

Even after all these years it still chokes me up.

I wonder what brand it was?

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